I think that this school year will be one of my best so far. I want to learn how to build a sukkah. Last year, one way I collaborated with others was in all of the projects we did. Another way I showed resilience was when I had a lot of homework.
I think that this school year will be one of my best so far. I want to learn how to build a sukkah. Last year, one way I collaborated with others was in all of the projects we did. Another way I showed resilience was when I had a lot of homework.
You said, “Another way Iwe showed resilience was…” when that was the first time you showed resilliance.
The sentence before was the first.
I think you could develop your ideas in more detail. If you went back to read this post in six months, you wouldn’t learn much from it. Be specific about why this year will be the best so far and what collaboration and resilience mean to you.
I also challenge you to think of a more appropriate title.
Thanks for changing the title 🙂